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Re: Burning.
Well, mascara could also be used on the bottom lashes. When it gets wet, it drips down your face.
Dec 3, 2009 -
Re: Burning.
Dancing in the rain As the tears fall down Mascara running down her face As she smiles at burning space Twirling in joy Laughing at the pain Caused by her ...
Dec 2, 2009 -
Re: The Sun.
Well... This is just random. It's part of my photography.
Dec 1, 2009 -
Re: Tiffany's Photography
I really like them. Very artistic and different. Keep Up The Awesomeness (: ~Kat.
Dec 1, 2009 -
Re: The Ending.
Watching the rain wash away my blood from my finger tips. Numb with fear, staring at the glass pieces in my hand. Listening to the waves crashing against the rocks. ...
Nov 30, 2009 -
Re: The Love of Him
This is really cute. I love it. I like the feeling it gives when reading it. Keep writing. (: ~ Kat.
Nov 29, 2009 -
Re: That Night
Hi Sarah. I really like this one. But, I think that you should add a litte bit more to it. The beginning needs to be added more upon. The rest ...
Nov 29, 2009 -
Re: Secrets
Hi Sarah. Your poem ( can't remember what catigory I'm under, pretty sure its poems. ) seems like it can be a base. You don't have much though. I think ...
Nov 29, 2009 -
Re: Sacrifice.
Boy: What would you do if I were to die in a week? Girl: I’d be with you every second. Boy: What would you do, if I were to leave? ...
Nov 28, 2009 -
Re: 2012
Honestly, my opinion is that 2012 is bogus. How could something about us dying really come true? Old writings in a book are believable? They predicted that the world was ...
Nov 28, 2009 -
Re: Vulnerable
Constantly feeling the same; vulnerable & hopeless. Like your soul isn’t even there. Your body is moving, but you mind trapped in the past. So oblivious, but when you hear ...
Nov 26, 2009 -
Re: Her Happiness
Her world is nothing But loneliness and wonders Time to time she would cry Herself to sleep and hope She could never wake up from her dreams Her dreams are ...
Nov 26, 2009 -
Re: Stolen Hearts.
The Heart Starts With Love. Love Is What Trust Has Been Put Into Saving For All The Years Alone Built Up For The One Day It Is Stolen Believing In ...
Nov 26, 2009 -
Re: Drowning
The rhyming really caught my attention. Just reading it, i could feel the vibe of it. I really like the ending also. I love the potential. :smt002
Nov 26, 2009 -
Re: Alone
Wow, this is amazing. I wear no mascara So I cannot bleed is my favorite line. Artistic to compare mascara to bleeding. But, what if mascara was, and no rain. ...
Nov 26, 2009
